has potential
The animation was good as was the fight. Down falls were the voice acting and the plot. Here is a suggestion i just want to throw out there. You should build up the story a little further. The idea with the sword and everything is good, but you need to add to it.
honest but usefull review
first of all i want to say. i didnt see the first episode:P. second i didnt actually see many of your work. that doesnt mather cause i think this submission is still great. i will give the a review like its supossed to be done and not only say if its shit OR if it is tottaly heavenly. for every score i give a reason why i gave you this score.
here it is.
graphics- 8: i gave it a 8 because the frame by frame animations were very goodly done it looked really good. alto some frames looked like they werent finished the story was still possible to be followed
Style- 8: simple an other 8 because the frame by frame style made the movement more realistic at some parts and that is always important
Sound - 8: very good music wich fitted the fights very well.
Violence - 9: simply a 9 because what would you expect if you have a vampire in your story:P didnt expect a teaparty:P
Interactivity- 5: exept for the first part there didnt happend much so its was kinda boring.
humor - 2: thsi story was al bout the action. ( personal tip: but if you want 2 use humor try to play with words involving the char or the situation)
im done hope you found this review usefull;P elsewise your on your own noob:P
meh
well the animaiton was good, very nice music choices. but the voice acting sucked shit. its seemed more like a comic book when the people were talking. however this took a lot of work and you deserve some good words if nothing else. i loved the animations, sorry but thats all the nice words i can think of.
good job just get better voice actors
very good
for the first run out of this film its a very good attempt, the initial scenes made me think of the Devil May Cry console game series. there are however some details you let slide, like for instance after the vampire wearing black gets buried under the stone he comes out wearing a brown shirt, was there a changing cubicle amongst all that rock? and then in the close ups of the same vampire he wears a black shirt, but wen hes fighting after hes in brown. and also how the hell did Elizabeth fail to notice the vampire fall down the hole, heck screw that surely the vampire would have seen the hole. anyway good story line and nice music. good luck next time
nice
this looks like an altered dbz episode and i like dbz so ups on that. i really cant say anything bad, so keep it up and i hope to see more of these episodes!!!!!