it needs funnier jokes
Sorry, I am a big RE fan, but most of the jokes you had were:
1. Overused (the joke where a piece of the ceiling falls on Alfred, which you stole from LegendaryFrog)
2. Just plain stupid (tickets please?)
3. Cliches that I've seen a thousand times before (the "who wrote this crap" part)
there were a few good points, like the hunk minigame, and I liked how you spoofed many of the RE games instead of just one game, like most people would do. I also like your art style, its very unique.
In short, what could have been a great RE tribute, stinks worse than a rotting zombie, and needs to be buried as quick as possible. My advice: sit down with your friends for an hour and think up some funnier RE jokes.
PS- I have a ton of good ideas that would do good in an RE flash, if you need a few extra RE jokes, just email me and I'll be happy to share