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Not bad. I think you should try to get som voice actors though. It would have helped a little. The speach buble approach I liked, as using subtitles would have taken away from the cartoon.
The humor was good, but all seemed unrelated and random. It could be that I would have needed to see some of your other work to get it. Overall, nice job.
Fine. I got voice actors, you bastard. Episode 2 will have voices. And I might actually redo Episode 1. But you're right, it's better with voices. Thanks
the plot was good but there wasn't enough humor.
It was starting off good but then it kinda went down hill but i would like to see another one like this just more humor.
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that was among the greatest fanfics ive seen. unfortunately the lack of audio dialogue was a slight drawback, but it was still great.
Ok what was that all about
When you said you were going to make a fan section out of me I didn't expect the graphic to be that great, how does it make me look like ^_^
Oh well you always liked to make a fool out of me hehe
Fred from Metool Production
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5 for interactivety cos' I liked the mini game lol I enjoyed that it was pretty funny It reminded me of a comic I used to read called Monobrow comics but they don't make em no more oh well lol ove the animation it rocked made me laugh and is spilling ith nutritious funnyness