Great!
Don't listen to that BrassMonkey guy. You did great. The action was very good and you were very accurate with the design with all the units. The only thing that bugged me was the mouth movement. It looked to me like shape tweens? Anyway that's the only thing I think you need to improve. Otherwise you did really good I can't wait for the next espisode.
I've been resisting doing lip syncing because it is tedious and incredibly boring, but it feels like it's whats going to have to be done to get right up there! It was just a loop of a tweened rectangle, heh.
The guy below doesn't realize there was Zerg XD
THERE WAS ZERG AND THIS WAS A WOOP ASS VIDEO! GOOD JOB MAN!!!
Mediocre, but certainly not bad.
Yur submission was a decent piece that I feel you could make better.
Graphics: Not bad at all. You were able to get a way with a lot of tweening do to the 3D element used for a lot of the vehicles and weapons, however this effect slashed with the 2D drawn images. Though it it was done much better than most #d inclusion attempts I've seen. Try and make the 2D better as I felt it lacking and having to little animation. Also make use of the 3D and have rotations added too. Unless al that 3D was generated in a 2D program.
Sound: the voice acting was bad...I know it's hard to find good voice acting and sound equip...but it was lacking. Also the music didn't feel like it had any impact. Get something more fitting and play with volume levels.
Despite, certainly a decent piece with potential.
Ruined the Starcraft look
Terran race is supposed to be very technically advanced, so when they went into the Generals office, it looked like a modern day work office, not even a modern day military bunker. It was awful, boring, and bland. I stopped watching after they got back into the ship. Also, ditch the humour. For one thing, you don't know how to use it, also, it has no place in the Starcraft universe. You made them look stupid. The dialogue needed serious work, and the quality of the voices was poor at best. Silly accents were added for no reason. Wheres Zerg in all of this? Overall, I can tell there was a lot of effort put into it, but you are so off base with respect to the Starcraft look. This shouldn't have made it to the first page, and same with the first one.
Watch things before you review them
Graphics have gone down in quality from the last
There is absolutely nothing wrong with the story you have so far. It's pretty good. The graphics are good, and your rendering of the 3D designs for all the different starcraft units is superb (in a way that appears workable I might add, the game made it all look cartoonish). Your fight scenes are also nicely thought out and well done.
Now some negatives. As in the title, your graphics here have gone down in quality. I think, after going back and seeing just a bit of the first installment, it is because you neglected to "shade" your characters this time around. Also, I think you should have more emotion put into the voice acting, it all sounds very bland.
All in all however, this is a fitting second episode. Keep up the good work! 4/5
Good spotting - people said they hated the previous faces, that they didn't match the sharp edges of the rest of it - so I just did it with the pencil this time. I'll shade them as well next ep. Glad you're enjoying them :)