Very good
You need a newer version of flash but very good. And for those of you complaining about no preloader, when the whole thing loads just right click and rewind. Stupid bastards
Very good
You need a newer version of flash but very good. And for those of you complaining about no preloader, when the whole thing loads just right click and rewind. Stupid bastards
pretty good
A decent first movie. Good graphics for something drawn with a mouse. Excellent sounds. My suggestion would be to stylize it a little more. Without entertaining movements, it just seems a bit generic.
Not Bad.
Are you sure this is your first movie...Ever? I have to say that this is much better than I expected for a first movie, and in Flash 4 too. Keep practicing, you will get better with more time and experience.
Has promise
I'd say you need to work on timing. It felt like there was a lot of waiting. I think the premise is good, and most of the drawing and animation is good, you just need to put a bit more time in to it.
Also, you should probably upgrade your flash, if all you have is 4.
Good idea, needs work though.
I think this has potential, the idea is good, the sound is good, and i think its a funny idea, but the drawings need work, i think there needs to be ALOT more detail in the movie, and not be so choppy. If u would work on the animation and flow of it, i think u would have a very good movie.