I really didn't see what was so funny about this:
1) You got the wrong sprites for the characters. Ash and his lil' group aren't in that branch of Pokemon games =D
2) It wasn't funny, at all. He got called gay, and killed people for it. (???)
3) It was short, but not snappy.
You've got the right idea for the choice of sprites, I haven't seen that group before on NG (maybe they do exist somewhere in the labyrinth of submissions), but you should do something much better with them, you decide upon that as you would be making the flash =] Well, good luck in the future!