Over all good but style and characters needs work.
Your animation skills are leet. Very very good. The graphics great.
But what troubles me is that its impersonal. Obiously it was for a client so you have to do as they want instead of you want. But for a story or a toon the audiance needs to be able to connect better.
The darth Vader guy was fine and using stick men for his army was also fine. It was the good guys That I'm having trouble with. They all looked like clones of each other. Unfeeling toys with no soul. They had no expression on thier faces and I wasn't able to emotinally connect with them.
The good guys need to be more personal, more human with expressions and feelings. And differnt from each other more than colors and clothing.
The kite bit at the end was cute and the motions and fighting was flawless. Very nice.
Thanks for another submission.
You didnt really need emotions for your other submissions since it was just dancing but for a story they need to be more "human".