awwwww yeah
love it lyrics a little repetitive though :P the melodie is great it changes up at the just the right time great job man
Reviews for "[SxHx] N'thisisex"
shesmackshard responds:
Thanks! The repetitive lyrics are most definitely an artifact of the genre, so I definitely understand it. It actually bothers me in house a little bit.
But most definitely thanks for the review.
great
when the hats moved in with the beat it went really well with the claps ... to be honest i dont about the repeating "sex" part but hey i dont know this genre well... anyway great track... check out my latest submission if you got time.
shesmackshard responds:
I think Im taking out the sex part for the album lmao. Anything on NG are just the cut versions, the albums gonna be longer.
And sure, as soon as I get home from class in about an hour, I'll review your new submission, kind sir.
Thanks! :)
Prrfect :D!
Ive never heard a house song about sex, anyways, this was a good sex, ehh, i mean song.
The drums here are awesome, the song would be nothing without them and the lyrics!
-Dj Esyrik :^
shesmackshard responds:
Quite different from the review below. Me weird how fair reviews can differ.
Somehow I agree with both of you.
Mainly I can say i love this song, because I love house :)
My review, your song.
Intros with a wet reverb synth, which works, a sight automation instead of the instant snap might make for a smoother beginning.
The kick is a bit weak, I think if you were to play with its pogo to make its attack quicker, and mix it seperately to either have a volume priority over the lead synth it would contribute much better to the house feel.
The voice sounds very very cheap. It sounds like a text generator talking, and overall this song has a very Bennybenassi sound to it. The voice needs more mixing done to make it either unique or memorable. It sounds kind of weak. If you record yourself imitating the robot voice you can get a higher quality of audio, saying it on beat, and with your chosen inflections. Then proceed to bit crush it a bit for that scratchy pc sound (which will maintain a bass quality in the human voice), and vocode it for that synthetic sound. If I'm way off, then in future maybe just try that for the sake of it.
The vocals are kind of goofy, personally I don't like them, and I think from a business perspective un-smooth robots repeating sex isn't really super duper either. They need more of a fluidity to them to work them into the song to make them a little more cohesive to the overall song.
Drums overall sound like they have no panning done to them, and very little mixing. Rather simplistic rhytmhns played, there are some decent rolls of sorts throughout the song, but nothing particularily prominent. At about 2:02 its sounds very default-drum-preset-y to a very simple house/trance drum pattern. Not a strong sound. While they don't detract from the song, they aren't memorable.
Lead synth (and at higher parts sounds like its just playing on top of itself an octave up) sounds good. Only suggestion I'd make on tweaking the sound is to make its reverb and the original instrument have varied levels of stereo seperation so the audio has an in and out ping-pong sound. Helps get more mileage out of simplistic melodies.
Song would benefit from some other instruments, be it a deep bass or a few higher up clean synth stabs, it would add a lot more depth to the song.
Overall: Drums need more individual mixing to sound varied, and less preset like. Synth is interesting and could be tweaked a bit more to sound a bit more moving. Structure of song is simple, but thats the nature of house. Vocals goofy, felt on top of the song, not part of it. Overall overall: Not a bad song but does not stand out.
shesmackshard responds:
Thanks for the review!
The vox on this one wasnt as serious haha, you caught me. And the personally enjoyed the mixing on these drums *cries*
Thanks man! All is considered.
not bad man.
i gotta say the lyrics made me laugh haha
only thing i have to say is the base seems a little quiet.
besides that good song ;)
5/5 9/10
shesmackshard responds:
The bass synth or the low levels of EQ? Because Ive checked levels on my 7.1 Surround and Monitors and they both pump. But Ill check them again. Thanks!