Jeremy wnats to see you...
Why don't you ever come visit us anymore? It's your baby too! I can't raise him alone, you don't even pay child support anymore! You can't keep making these silly cartoons forever! Someday you'll have to look in the mirror and say "I want to fuck my exhusband." And then you'll remeber me, I'll "B" waiting "4" "U" "4ever"! Just come home!
loved it
i loved your style, nothing beats a pencil and a piece of paper... NOTHING. This is the first sick animation I've seen so i have to say i'm likin what i see, and i will definitely check out more.
Would have like a better ending but...
It was very funny. You know, I'm too lazy to think of why, but it was just really funny. You should continue this as a series or soemthing dude. It would be AWESOMENESS! If it would have had a good ending, you would be getting a 10...
Paper and Pencil animation done good!
At first glance I was a little disappointed, I figured I was in for something pathetic in the first ten seconds. But as soon as it got to that part with the soccer player, it kept rolling out with humor. Though it wasn't non-stop funny, the funny parts were quite memorable, I saw this a week ago and me and my friends are still quoting it. The only problem is that it wasn't long enough. Try a longer sequel. This is great material for a series. Keep up the good work.
nice
yo this thing was hilarious the whole way thru. except for the last joke which sucked balls. like the last joke wasnt funny at all. the cheeto crumbs, the soccer balls. the x ray thing had me laughing hard. and the comedian thing was pretty funny too but i didnt laugh out loud. and when they said "seen" instead of "shawn" it reminded me of charlie the unicorn or some other animation where they said seen instead of shawn. the pitch of their voices also reminded me of charlie the unicorn.