Perfect.
The only thing I suggest is for you to fill in the blanks.
Tell why the city became the way it did. Or go into more detail on how the girl was brought into this world. Either way...it's perfect.
Reviews for "El Despertar"
At first I thought, Children aren't scary...
When I first started watching it, I thought children were good... but then the paying her part kinda freaked me out. You have a unique style all your own, and it really showed off in this flash. One lesson is... give money to children. Good Job!
Astoundingly Brilliant
This was fantastic, I absolutely love all your cartoons. Keep making more.
absolutamente asombroso
DEFINITELY the best of the children r skary series. i love the dark twist towards the end. hilarious, creepy, beautiful, and artistic. felicitaciones!
You...
Always blow my mind with your toons.Your my effin inpiration xD!
Great job with this one.