Reviews for Flying with the Wind

[Animith]

Nicely done.

Reviewing as I go:
The subtle entrance of the strings at 0:13 is awesome. I almost wish the piano in this section was a little quieter, but then again the emotive power of it is quite effective.
At the 0:35 mark, the lower notes I think could use being a little quieter, just to emphasise the absence of the strings a little more.
I love the semi-absence of the strings in general. Insofar as even when they're playing, you can barely hear them; as if they're an echo themselves. Given this is meant to symbolise wind, it works very well.
1:06 is genius. The fluidity of the next minute also works well, especially given the subject matter.

The final chord could probably be fine without the strings added in. Simply because the echo on the strings at around 2:55-2:58 seems a little unnatural, Which is a shame, because the piece in general is very good. It's got a great air of melancholy. The piano sound is a little harsh at times, but apart from that I can't fault this. Looking forward to hearing the next two pieces from this, definitely.

Jabicho responds:

Thanks so much for taking the time to review my piece, it means a lot to me, and i can't thank you enough. Loved reading your comment, and it helps a lot to improve, thanks again!

I made a mistake while I wrote the info about the piece, hehe, this is already the second piece, you can find the other one called "Dwelling at the Bottom of the Ocean" at my audio page, and I'll submit the third one tomorrow =) i'll let you know when it's uploaded, take care!

[DivineFlame]

Hmmm...

I don't know what Krayon's problem is but I personally think that this piece is great! I like the way you portrayed the wind. The words "flying" and "wind" don't have to mean fast and soaring. With this piece I can imagine gently flying in the clouds in peace. Flying to me is more relaxing and beautiful than the extravagant soaring that Krayon wants. I think you did a wonderful job with it. It's beautiful!

Jabicho responds:

Hi there DivineFlame! Thanks for your comment!

Yeah, I Think that each element or other subject in a piece, has a different meaning for everyone, so a piece can be open to many interpretations of the same thing.
I think mine is more relaxing and calmed than Krayon's interpretation, but his idea of more strength and dynamic in the wind is a cool idea too, hehe none is wrong or right compared to the other =)

Thanks so much for saying you liked my piece! =) it means a lot!

[IzzyMoon]

Wonderful.

A beautiful piece to move to. I am in love with the piano. Thank you.

Jabicho responds:

Thanks for saying that Izzy!

[LavitzSlambert]

sorry

hey Jabi, sorry I took so much time to come check out the second and third part.

I really like this piece, since it sounds just like the wind. It can be soothing and relaxing, like a breeze, but at the next instant it's racing and holding you back. Both an obstacle and a friend.

I can't help but feel this one since it's wind themed, it makes me remember as a kid, when I was frustrated or sad, I would go to the park, and go on the swing, swing a bit, close my eyes and feel the breeze, just to calm me down...

you move me yet again Jabi :O,
-Lavitz

Jabicho responds:

Hey there my friend! dont worry about the time, its great to find a comment from you :)
thanks for sharing that memory, I imagined it and loved it. Thanks again for listening, take care!

[palagriz]

second song heard from your collection and still lovin it.this song is perfect for any animation.:D

Jabicho responds:

Thanks! that's cool, I would love it if you use it