Very funny though philosophically completley wrong
This is an absolutly fantastic piece. I really enjoyed your style, yes it is 'simple' but this does not make it easy to do well! The story has been unfairly attacked in previous reviews so I will stand up for it and say that it works because of the inventive situation. I can not for the life of me see how it fails to be cohesive. The main strength though is the humor, it is actually funny which is quite a rarity on newgrounds. The "making of" has rightly been pointed out as perhaps the best bit of all. My only minor quibble is that you get the solution to the grandfather paradox so hoplessly wrong! Now this may have been deliberate and this is not the place to go into long winded explanations of the metaphysics of time but if you are interested in the correct solution feel free to contact me directly (the truth is stranger then fiction!!). Fantastic job and I look forward to seeing your future work!