Nicely done!
Frankly, there are only two things that need work on this: Fix the background pixelation, and neaten up the characters. I have to say, even with slightly sub-par graphics, this deserved an award. I enjoyed the character design and the style, but my favorite part was undoubtedly the movements. Both characters move cleanly and quickly, and you use very few still tweens. When you do, you've got movement on the objects themselves, which keeps things nice and fluid. Good job!
it was good
that was well done in my books.
graphics 548/1000
style 657/ 1000
sound 800/1000
voilence 500/1000
interactivity i do not know what that is
humor 123/1000
overall 1000/1000
yes i know the two rateing thing say difrint stuff but plz do not be mad with it
have fun and love ya
Pls, For god's sake..... Chinese on NG.....
Not every one on NG can read chinese like me. Other then that, no comments.
great job
very fluid and smooth, liked the instrument, though could have been a better song. it still needs some imporving but with practice it will come. good job, love the story
NICE!
I like it, short, sweet, and very straight forward. I must say that if you say your an ameture, then you have very little to improve on to work in the big leagues! I hope to see more of your work.