hmm..
Suprisingly like something i submitted yesturday....
I like the sprites :)
Everything else was average or poor
Reviews for "Super Mario The Beggining"
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i...dont...know...what to say ...oh yes i do! it was bad! ADD MORE SOUD AND LESS READING! k? k! BYEQ!
okay
it was a bit to short and the story behind it wasnt that good
It was good but..
You have potential. But first things first:
Silences are never good. Try to add a background music/loop.
Text was dodgy, and abit too fast from time to time. Might try a little continue button or something.
But furthermore, good idea, and i like the idea of mario starting off because mario pissed off bowser... this makes me wanna play mario 1.
GJ!
BurntIceProductions responds:
The same thing happens to me when i watch a Mario movie. After watching any Mario movie, i usually wanna play the game. And I got the music for the next one. It won't be hard with the music because the next one will be making fun of sidescrollers, while sticking to the story, I already thought of 2 jokes and how to pick up from this part.
Youve Got Potential
it was good but i suggest some music if you cant download it anywhere try the audio portal the text is slurred and dont fit in the bubble. try to improve this in ya next one make more! =)