Really funny jokes save this one.
The animation wasn't anything spectacular on its own, but when put together with the audio and self-referential humor it was truly entertaining.
Only thing I would recommend in the future would be to pay more attention to the subtitles. It was one of the focal points of the animation, but you seemed to get sloppy with punctuation and spelling. I'm pickier than most, but with the text changing point size between sentences and aligning weird I think it could also be a turn-off to other people as well.