OK
Good on music (although it was in no way related) Good on animation
But the key point: Story. It didn't really make sense. Who is Tom? Why was he convicted? A few more questions but more to the point. Try to make some sense, i mean, seriously, where was he? a bg would help that. Sorry for my criticism but this could use some work. Other than that great job!
well, i put a link to the first one, so watch that for more backround, i origanly had the first one as just a test, then i was gonna make a silent war movie (no sound FX) with just the music, but decided to link it together and make a story, i am curently working on part 3, which will have more of the plot explained. thank you for your commments.
i'm very new to both animation and story writing, i started about 2 months ago.