No second yet?!
I've been waiting for a while under the impression that you would be making a second at some point, when I finally decided to re-read the description, and found that you said 'the song ends before the story did', not 'there will be a second to make up for it'...
Hmm...I say you should make a second, I've been waiting to see how the story ends xD
I don't know why, but it dosen't seem like someone would be fighting to this song at all - And, yet, it fits so perfectly.
Humor's a 5 because I laugh every time she sniffs the orb, no matter how many times I watch it, and I just can't get over how...Laid-back she is as she murders these gigantic beasts. Practically laughs in their faces.
Please make a second. ^^;