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Reviews for "HW - Logic"

Very breakbeat-esque

I gotta give you credit, this is better than my first DnB song. Quite original, in fact; most of the stuff that's put out here emulates the "almighty" PX9 (who's good, but overrated IMO). I like the chimes in the background, and the guitar (is that guitar? if it is, noice!) quite a bit. The wobbly bass and halftime drums you add at 1:15 give it a dubstep flavor that's otherwise absent in most DnB songs. The only thing I think you could have done better is varied the drum part a little bit more, like tried triplet beats in areas; brought the bass up in the wobbly section, as it becomes more like a lead instrument (not overly so, but it just has too much of a background flavor, when I KNOW that it has the potential to be nice and full); and, also, tried melodic extension -- which is essentially taking the theme of your song and experimenting with the melody to give it the same feel but a totally different pattern, keeping the listener enticed and also preventing the listener from getting confused on whether or not he/she is listening to the beginning or the end of the song (although, I do know it is the nature of DnB to get repetitive. It's okay to be repetitive if you think one particular melody is really important, but variation, I've found, elevates the song to a point that's really exceptional). The mastering's pretty good too, maybe just slightly too quiet, but hey, I like the breakbeat fashion of this song very much. For the first time, this is really good, I like it!
9/10
5/5
Fav'd.

haywirehaywire responds:

thanks a lot for the review man, yea its guitar, this was made just when i got my acoustic guitar so i recorded the stuff that your hearing in it.
true, the melody doesnt change much so i gotta give you that, thanks for the honesty.

Not bad

If this is your first attempt, I think you did a pretty decent job. A pretty solid beat with some cool effects in the background = awesome in my eyes. I really liked the breakdown at the :43 mark. 4/5 and 9/10

haywirehaywire responds:

thanks a lot thats actually my favorite part too haha