fatal ending
so interesting at first, WTF?!?!?! the ending was totally random i.e. sucked.
Reviews for "Slime Love"
ThatRoomThere responds:
ehh. thanks for the interesting part.. and i ran out of ideas for the ending so figured, y not kill one of them. its always a good solution
Its ok.
Well, its ok. Good sound and bright colors. But what was that all about in the end? The pink girl slime blob getting hammered by...whatever it was. It has potentional to be better.
ThatRoomThere responds:
Yeah, i dont like the ending either, i just ran out of ideas. haha, ill fix it when someone gives me help.
It was OK
This isn't terrible for a first try. It was a cute little story, but the ending didn't really fit in. The story was cute, although it was a little cliche. Your characters were very simple and it fit well with the mood of the animation. There are so many things you can build on. Work on your animations, your backgrounds, your dialogue, maybe for future works get some voice actors if it's applicable to your flash. I wish you luck with your future projects. Just keep working diligently and I'm sure you'll come up with some good stories. Not a bad try for a first time, but with practice you'll get much better. Cheers!
ThatRoomThere responds:
thanks :).
the ending was put in because most people at newgrounds hate movies with no violence, so i thought id get an even less score.
itll get blammed anyway :(
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btw... you could end it better. it is like you didn't have ideas or time to complete it.
ThatRoomThere responds:
alright, thanks.
I have enough time.. ill just try to think of something better.