Graphics need a little work, but well done!
I was very impressed with this flash. Not only was it about a game that sci-fi fans swoon over, but it was surprsingly funny.
Not only did you build off of the Starcraft universe, but the jokes were quite funny and easy to follow. I thought some of the parodies were well done, especially the Seige Tank joke. "Stereotype! Stereotype!"
On the other hand, I believe there is room to improve on. Although this is a parody, you still need to spend more time on the visuals as well as the jokes. There seemed a bit rushed and unimpressive (with the exception to those that were ment to be that way). Also, some of the soundbytes need a little work as it was hard to distinguish what was being said, especially on the Zerg translation scene.
Else wise, well done.
B.T.W. - Excellent ending! "TO HELL WITH WARCRAFT!!!"