beautiful
thankyou...
Reviews for "Breath Me"
Beautiful
An artistic piece that kept me watching until the end.
Nicely done.
Wasn't my bag
I didn't connect with the flash at all but I still tried to rate this objectively. The graphics were pretty good and while I didn't like your style, I found it somewhat unique. There wasn't much else to grade it on. 3/5
cheshirecat1582 responds:
Hey not every one can like the same thing you know! so Thank you so much for rating objectively! :)
The music makes this work
i really enjoyed this submission. i cant give a concrete reason as to why, but suppose it had mostly to do with the way the music blended with the images. i particularly liked the black butterfly thing you got going, and the way you dumbed down people to mere skeletons. i thought it was very powerful. i kind of agree that its a little hard to hear the song, but i went and listened to an mp3 of the song and i really enjoyed it. i think its the song that gives this animation its power. keep thinking and work more with your symbolism. these could be an interesting series.
Courageously Noir
This is the second movie by Ashley Voortman I've seen. Again, this was a well done clip, but its just a bit lacking. I'm expecting something more. There's just a bit too many fillers in the movie. She touches on a few really great things but I don't feel she goes all the way. The story and feelings are just on the cusp of something better. I'm sure she could take it to the next level. It's almost there. The video just doesn't make as great of an impact as it could. It doesn't touch one enough. It doesn't reach out and grab you. It's all a bit too random. The themes need to be more well developed as does the message. Lots of potential here.