thats more like it
like a week or 2 ago I thougt newgrounds was taken over by 12 year old kids. since pico day I see that the real flash artists were working so hard on there things without submitting untill, it was really good.
about the flash itself, grapics are pretty good, in a strange kind of style. so style automaticly became a 10. the song welpicked, however, I think there are more songs that could give the same effect and sound better even.
well great job, keep it up
Great
this was...nice...very abstract, touching song, and uh, where do u live exactly, cause ur profile isn't really informative enough....
Thank You soooo much!!!! I live in Iowa lol yes the corn state... just a small town in iowa prob havnt heard of it souix city. Thanks again!!
Nice animation
Strongest part of the animation for me was the black and brown pattern whos elements faded out. The skeletons were also effective and reminded me of primitive art.
Weakest part of the animation was the lipsync sequence.
Consider citing the music artist a more prominantly.
Yeah I have to agree. The Lipsync is the weakest part... Thanks for the review! any little advice helps!
WHOA<3
That was the best Flash I've ever seen on Newgrounds. Oh my God that was brilliant. I'll be surprised if you don't reach number one. Good luck with that, Ashley good luck. Good everything. That flash was perfect. Do you do this professionally? YOu should think of doing stuff like this for companies or something. How long did it take you? *Grovels*
Wow Thanks sooo much for the complements!!!! Really thats what makes me want to work with more flash! Actually Im still in high school but maybe when I graduate I will think about going professional but really I would rather just have fun on NGs you know. Invent my own style and put my thoughts and words into pictures. This flash took me prob. 3 or 4 week to compleat. Thank you soooo much for the great review!! A Ten!! wow thanks again!!
-Ashy
really good
there were too many shape tweens at the start but the graphics were amazing and most of the animation was good. there were a few simple things you could do to make it better but it was still really good. far better than i could make.
Thanks!! Its the constructive critisizum that really counts you know! I can really learn from that!! Thanks again!