Plenty of work involved here
First off, I can tell you did a very good job with the graphics. I really like the large size of the screen - too many flash's seem like 3 inches wide. I personally did not find the story too exciting, but with such lovingly done visuals, I think I will watch your next submissions. I would suggest that you make the alien voices a bit more clear; when they talked on the ship it was a bit hard to understand them. Nice work, I would like to see you try something of a totaly different subject, but with the same amount of art. Good luck.