Trumpets are our friends.
I like it, I would pump up the brass and strings a lot. Honestly, it all blends together and needs a distinct, tighter sound. But don't let my previous statement deter you because this is really awesome. I think this could go well into dimension 7 if you worked on it more. Your mind is working nicely today.
It was a decent job.
I think it would make a good action song without the electric bleeps and computerish noises (although i suppose the name tells you why) but it sounds like there is fart noises in there? That was a bit wierd, althought right now i'd happily replace my fucked up laptop for one that constantly made fart noises.
lulz.