hm.
it won't let me click on anything, hon, have you got your codes rights?
Reviews for "Can you review?"
PARAGON-pvp responds:
I do have my codes right, there might just be something wrong on your end of NG, try again sometime, because it's working for everyone else and it works fine for me and i tested it about 5 times before i submited it
PARAGON_pvp
Ok, but
People never pay attention to 'how to vote/review/submit' flashes.
ok but...
you made it much too simple anyone can choose the right answer i mean its not rocket science so this didn't really help but atleast your trying. i suggest you make it so you have to write an actual review and when they are done it will check for spelling mistakes, inpropper language and overall if you wrote it right. making someone just choose an answer does nothing. its nice to see your trying to improve peoples reviewing skills but this flash needs more work, hope your next work is better.
PARAGON-pvp responds:
thanks for the reivew, i'm not sure if i will make something like that because i have another game in the making (have been working on it for a few months) and i only made this one because i knew i could finish it within a day, but thanks for the review anyways
PARAGON_pvp
My True Opinion is...
I don't like this flash, but I'll give constructive critism: What you needed was to zoom in a bit on the front page image having something like 4 icons which was not heavily compressed... I could barely see those icons.
You also need to use better sound compression because this would've loaded much faster for everyone if you had compressed the music some more.
Also two few options on the reviews, those i'm afraid were also too hard to see or do I need glasses? :P
PARAGON-pvp responds:
thankyou for the review, i will make the game size bigger once i get back on the computer i made it on,,, and the music was already compressed down the 2.3% of the original file, and i'm not sure why it was still such a big file =S i'll work on that too when i get to my other computer. And the size of the game being made bigger will fix the last problem you stated
PARAGON_pvp
(( IT WAS OK ))
~~REVIEW~~
Well this was interesting, not sure if this is can you review or how you should follow review guidlines, i did notice something that could be fixed though, everytime it went to the image there was no button to move on, i always found myself "RIGHT CLICKING" but it was some good insight on following the newground review guidlines, its common sense really, but it was notbad, nice work.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some buttons or improved buttons.
~~OVERALL~~
Learning how to review or how to read rules is always nice.
~X~