Reviews for Al-Quada Music Video

[FattyWhale]

Crap

^^Good Points^^
The drawings were actually half decent. Your planes and ships look pretty accurate, and it looks like you spent some time drawing them.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm not sure what you are really trying to accomplish here. This is supposed to be an Al-Queda Music video, however, you have the al queda playing drums and dancing to an American punk/rock song, then getting blown up. I don't really understand the logic behind this. The music doesn't make sense and doesn't go well with this movie at all. The explosion at the end looked really crappy as well.

SMIRF-06 responds:

I really don't know what I was "supposed" to aaccomplish, i did this for fun, so i guess i did? bec. i had fun doing it. Don't take the Title soooo very serious there not singing the American song, its just the song i chose and it fits just fine im really sorry everyone doesn't connect Dot A and B....There was no LOGIC in making it, im sorry if you were looking for some sort of Philosphical meaning or moral...cause there is not one...i wonder what rocks you ppl crawl from ?

[Monkey-Box]

First of all...

Learn how to use the ease tool. It really helps smooth things out in animation.

Secondly, while NG is a bit of a harsh environment, what do you expect us to say? "GOOD JOB!! YOU MADE A FLASH! ZOMG DIS ROX." Uh, no. You made a flash that could have been better.

I'm glad to know that you don't like terrorists, but hey, if you're going to make a cartoon about it, make something quality, man. It's very apparent that you gave a good amount of effort, but just play around with flash some more, and keep workin' at it.

(Oh, and don't pull that "GET A GF OR WIFE/JOB LOLZ" crap with me, ok?)

Keep at it,

Monkey Box

SMIRF-06 responds:

well thank your the Tip i will def. look into that, and I don't expect people to say whatever that meant ( I didnt get it all) but nor should people just say "thats shit" and then leave it, id rather have somone say "yay" or "nay" then why, and then maybe a tip not just...thats crap, go kill yourself...lol

[Avarith]

Nope

First of all, this video isn't very good, and I don't intend to keep it in the portal. I figure I should start by saying that plainly.

You've mentioned to people that didn't like the music-video match that the song can be interpreted as the US searching for terrorists, and I accept that; themes are open to interpretation. But that isn't why Green Day wrote this song, nor is it the most evident interpretation--or a particularly meaningful one.

As well as subpar animation, this video doesn't actually say anything worth listening to. I imagine one of your goals was to express your opinion about terrorists, but this was just silly. Congratulations, you don't like terrorsits. Join the club.

Poor animation is understandable; everyone starts somewhere. But try to give your flash relevant meaning, if that's what you are interested in doing in the first place. The song and video don't match, but more importantly, your flash just wasn't interesting.

SMIRF-06 responds:

*yawn* I'll keep this short..because your so "high" and "mighty" ..., I don't care why THEY wrote the song, I don't Care how "great" you are at flash, i do this for "Fun" because, and reaching my point....its a hobby, maybe you should get a JOB? a G/F or WIFE and grow up...why is NG so....Hostile towards "beginners", this would be a good reason why NG will never be as good as SFDT and other good sites that "Help" beginners because generally if you are interested in somthing and or...., want to keep it "alive" you pass your wisdom and experience on...not turn ppl off of it. Maybe you should grow up and not be such a prick? although i suppose that isnt possible.

[UriahTWolfe]

Cute idea

Cute idea, I liked it. I think the graphics were perfect for the content. But I think if you're going to be doing stuff like this to any major degree, you should learn how to take criticism a little bit better, whether you're American or not. ;-)

SMIRF-06 responds:

I don't mind "constuctive" critisim ..., although mostly what people write at NG seems to border just pure Ass-phobia (common term for people who don't have much else to do besides bitch at other people)

[psychoninja-zero]

Garbage

You have a play button for a preloader, the music doesn't go well with the flash and you have way too many issues with this.

SMIRF-06 responds:

Alright the pre-loader shouldn't be the main thing anyways, the song went just fine im sorry that your "complex" mind couldn't not connect dot A with Dot B, try again child, and yes i have several issues with the people depicted in this video. Im American. enough said to you.