*yawn*
I understand it was a first time flashimation, so from that perspective it wasn't bad. It was just rather boring is all.
*yawn*
I understand it was a first time flashimation, so from that perspective it wasn't bad. It was just rather boring is all.
Nice to get your feet wet
Your first submission, eh? Interesting approach. You seemed to try to do the best with what you know how to do- ie, words instead of lip sync, different images instead of movement, etc. Not very good, as a flash, but a great exercise in making one. If it gets blammed, don't be discouraged. Anything like this takes experience to get good at. Keep at it!
Thanks for your critisism.
Ive been using flash for a few months now after doing a course in it at uni, but this is my first real animation. Im an interface desinger you see, not an artist.
However, I do intend to put more things on newgrounds/devart in this style. Hopefully next time though, more animation.
funny as hell!!!
it might not have the best graphics,but this was funny as hell. you got a five from me! keep up the good work!
Thanks!
keep going!
hehe just continue improving graphics and more funny stuff and the voice over is good enough so keep going
Thanks!
I cant draw to save my life you see, thats why I used Rotoscope (drawing over pictures).
More are hopefully on the way, and im glad ya liked the voice over. I was abit worried about that tbh.
Rated PG
Nice stuff you got goin on, lol i like the words instead of there mouths. Few things you could have done better but i look forward to the finished thing anyway.
Cheers!
I must admit, the artwork isnt the best, but hopefully, if I do another, I'll spend more time on it. Probably make it longer too.