Not bad.
I thought it was ok, but there one majorish problem. Take a listen, you'll hear if you haven't already the breathing. It's really distracting.
---> ONE THING
Check out "DBZ Mawi Style" (name may be slightly different) You'll notice the sponsor thing. I'm not going to accuse you of anything, but i'm gonna let others go ahead.
not bad.
keep it up
Pretty goo young fella
I like your humor. Also, you did a nice job of showing us that McDonald's are A BUNCH OF MEAN PEOPLE. Taking that poor farmer's car. Tsk tsk. However, do not underestimate the power of strawberry clock.
Its Alright
Umm....did i miss somethign cause i didn't get it ? nice work on the animation though