good one!
great work i hope you bring some more for a few reasons:
- good humour ( my side still hurts from the laughter)
- good style ( i find it cute, i know im strange)
- the clay gave a good oportunity to do violence without any exageration
i do have one bad thing to say and its about the sound it wasn t good as the clay mens' voice was low but the guns sound was to loud. please be more careful about it next time.