Interesting and Promising Artist
I enjoyed the unique style to your work. The pixelated images gave an interesting effect. Your work, althought amateur, shows promise. Although I was a bit confused with the story, I understand that this is a preview. I look forward to the actual work. Some suggestions though...try to find a way so that it is obvious that you are going for the pixelated look so that idiots dont think that you are just a poor animator. Also, voice acting might enhance the quality of your work substantially. While your story seems quite interesting, make sure it is not so esoteric that the normal viewer will not be able to understand or appreciate it. Thats all, good luck.