What the hell.
The animation: I've seen worse. I've heard worse music, and so on.
But what the hell?
There was no plot line. The thing was over before I could even comprehend what was happing. Melon with tencles. Why? How?
All I saw was a melon that got tencles in in, and by the end of the movie had a gun.
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Oh, i get it, he sucked out all melon's color and shoved a gun into the melon. That's kinda cool... IF YOUR ON LSD
give it a personallity
there are all those clans like the glocks, the clocks and the locks.
it's allways nice to be apart of a group but people are getting tired of seeing them. at your work "even if it's short" i can see you have great potential and are a great artist. but you will not be appreciated as much as you would've been if you'd make a unique character, a standalone, with a face instead of a gun. it's just a personal advise, i don't expect you to follow it up (lol), but just make a unique character, with an own story (, a face and a voice) and with your drawing capacities, you ONLY will be getting positive replies.
good luck
Why?
Honestly, I'm getting tired of the glocks and the clocks. I only gave you a one because you have good graphics. This could be a better story, if you decided to go with another rute, but hey if you want to suject yourself to a bad label, then good luck to you.
Pretty Bad. By bad, I mean not good.
So some dude's flying around, does whatever with some random melon, and then the melon...does something. I'm hoping there's a sequel that'll explain things, or something similar, because this flash was just a waste of time. Graphics looked great, though.