Mwoah , it was alright.
I dont really like it myself but you put some effort into this so i dont see anny good reason to actually 'blamming' this since obviousley it isnt crap.
Wel , i'm sorry and i do hope other poeple will enjoy it more then i did , sorry mate.
Annyways , if your making more movies (longer ones , and not Advertisements) i'm looking forward to seeing them , so keep working mate.