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[Breed]

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Well lets hope you like critical reviews because thats usually all I do. First thing I noticed was the kick--it's got some raspy high noise going on that could likely be EQ'd out. Listening back I think you could also work on the dynamics of the piano more. The velocity of each note seems fairly level so the piano's melody doesn't seem to have as much motion or diversity to it. I do like the timbre of the back beat. I think a little more percussion variation could be in place without losing it's "rapability," but that could be just personal taste. The almost string like instrument that comes in second after the beat fits really well, however it might be interfering a little bit with the mid's in the piano, and it might need some counter EQing on maybe a mid sweet spot if you can find one on that piano. Anyways overall a little too long, but general timbre's work well, and the structure fits well for this type of hip hop.

Cheers!
- LD -

T-Free responds:

Thank you very much for the constructive criticism! You are right in all points, I only I hope I can solve every problem to make it sound better. The kicks can be edited easily, but I'll need some time to find some great new notes for the piano without making it less lyric-friendly. Thanks for taking a listen and commenting, LogicalDefiance, I appreciate it!^^

[Thur-San]

Awesome!

Really peaceful, it should be something perfect if someone could rap it, that's the only thing it needs.(to be like, the best peaceful Hip Hop Modern Song in the world!)
Awesome 10/10 5/5

T-Free responds:

Thanks for taking a look at my newest submission, Thur-San!^^
Would be great if there was someone who put lyrics onto this, at least I hope so. Thanks for the 10 and the 5! I'm glad you liked it! :)

[flamereaver]

Wow...

This might just be better then the last one and I like that this one is more lyric friendly. It's so relaxing! You should find someone to rap to this song :).

T-Free responds:

Yeah, thanks. I hope there will be some people who put lyrics onto this.^^

[elricbro1]

wow

this has a really nice piano melody combine with an upbeat...um...something. but it sounds great...i dont know how to add artists to "favourite audio artists" yet, (lol im such a noob) but when i figue out how to, your the first one on there! :D

T-Free responds:

If you want to add me as your favourite artist, you can klick on the heart symbol under my name when you listen to one of my tracks. Thank you so much, elricbro! I hope I won't disappoint you in future with the tracks that are going to come. Thanks. :]

[ShootingStar]

Amazing

Wow :) I'm really surprised how good this song is :D
The ONLY thing I would change would be to pull down the kick (not something you hear from me everyday)
Other than that, really amazing song :D
Like the counter melody in the background, sounds like it's being played by a bass really high or something :P
10/10
5/5

Check out some of my stuff please!
ShootingStar

T-Free responds:

Hey, thanks! Great to see a review by you again, ShootingStar! And yes, I'll take a listen at some of your tracks when I get down to it.^^