Not a bad start...
It's not that bad of a start. But there is a lot of work that still needs to be put into this thing. For example, make the title more easier to see. Don't have the crosshairs up all the time. Only during game time perhaps. Also, why the hell are the crosshairs spinning? Crosshairs don't spin. Make the stationary. Spend more time on the graphics, too. Don't rush through the visuals to get it done faster. Make the graphics the primary focus to get a more appealing look. Keep working on it and it may turn out quite good.