First try!
This is very good for a first flash.
Just add a preloader. There's loads of tutorials for 'em in the NG.
And it's 5 megs?! You didn't compress it, though. The ending music was probably 128kbps or so. What it should be is 56kbps MAXIMUM.
I know it'll sound shit, but it's supposed to. I probably loaded this flash longer than it played. And that's not supposed to.
okay, ill fix that some time when its not 2:00 in the morning :D
Not bad...
for a first. Remember, compression is your friend. This didn't have to be 5 megs.
Despite the old joke, it was decent. It'll probably make it.
I actually did compress it, maybe i did it wrong tho.
Good job
Nice job for a first flash. The animation was pretty good and I liked the joke. lol. I havn't heard that one before. I didn't like the voice acting very much though.
Pretty good
Lol, i have heard that joke before but i have never seen anyone put it on flash so good job at getting the idea first. The animation was good but the voice acting could be better but still good job in making it.
Decent
It wouldnt let me vote for some reason, so I thought I would leave a review.
It was pretty good. Could of been a little longer, but I think it is fine for the portal. Better than anything I could do. good job.