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Reviews for "Elfire - Bitter Valentine"

Great!

Your tracks are so adrenaline-pumping! Keep up the good work :D Downloaded!
This is excellent for a "chiongster" mission in CS or HL :D

Good production, but repettitive

I feel you could change it up more, rather than holding out as long as it does for each main idea. I'll tell you that the song is very nicely produced, I just wish it didn't hold out for so long for each main idea you had, and had more variation instead. Doesn't mean to go all over the place, just don't hold out for so long maybe.

I personally think this song would sound better if all unneeded repeations were simply just cut out. It may only be about 3 mins, but it will be less likely to get boring to listeners.

Elfire responds:

Cant say i really agree with ya there, fairly certain no 4 bars are quite the same but hey, each to thier own. was going for a overall build rather than sections, there is a lead thats overused but it doesnt sound much of a build without it =[

anyways, thanks for the review.

Elfire - Bitter Valentine/KittehTron's Perrspectiv

Hey, I loving prrogrressive trrack lots of style and soul! I would rrecommend adding a sub-bass and sidechain yourr kick to give yourr song a massive "Push Pull" effect to bring yourr amazing trrack to a new level!

Style:10/10
Orrginality:9/10
Varriety/Hook:8/10
Note: Excellent Worrk!! Solid!
Final Scorres: 8.8/10
Rrating: 5/5

Elfire responds:

Ohhh yeh i tried side chaining a meaty bass with the kick but it didnt turn out so well, i used the peak controller + stereo enhancer, maybe im not doing it right.

Anyway, thanks for the review and the awesome marks =]

- Elfire