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well that was different...
As said before it was kinda long, But i do find that not all ppl can read as fast as others so having a butten under each page would have been better, As the slow readers could skip when they need and the faster readers could fly through it.
Also no credits, It would be better to give credit where it is do namily the songs and the artists.
Story was kinda funny. would be quiet good if u made an actual animated version.