Very nice
This was pretty good. Even if it wasn't flash, the only thing it really needed was better sound and a skip button. I like the smooth animation to.
Bernodus, you're a fucktard. Learn to spell, and get a fucking brain, ok? Then I might deem you worthy of being punched in the face.
Hey, you may even make it to the rank of groin kick some day. Ass.
Hehehe... Right on!
Well...that was different
Yeah, it wasn't really flash. But that doesn't stop it from being good, right? I'm sure there are a lot of things you know you need to improve on, like the lack of sound (sound=excitement!), That trial thingy that was in the way, and...maybe the lengthy intro. The intro was about half of the flash, maybe find a way to cut it down a bit? Other than that, the actual movie was really smooth and well choreographed and put together. It was short, but I'm sure the next one you do will be much better!
This is a proper review, people! follow TheRavenger's example!
lol
lol bet that took you ages lol
No, not too long.
Mediocre
It was okay, but there's room for improvement. And you're forgetting about the very short attention span of the average newgrounds user. Many will vote zero purely because of the lengthy introduction. Just a tip.
Figured. But, the average newgrounds user is also a complete asshole.
Fairly good attempt
The idea was cliche and the animation was hindered. I understand that getting a application is expensive and can be very drainging on the income. But to have any chance of getting in you have to get a ersion that doesn't have that trial thing spread across the whole flash.
Besides that it was pretty decent. I gave it a 1/5 but you could easily improve upon it and get far higher ratings.
Good luck!
Ya, that trial thing is pretty annoying, but im soon going for another program that doesnt have that.
Oh, and ur mother was a goat-