Bravo
I can literally feel the work that went into this. You've got a good concept of camera angles and their significance. The audio choice was great and fit well with the mood of the story. Diolouge could have been a bit more diverse, but that's ok, it caused no harm to the wonderful presentation you put together.
Really enjoyed it, I would heavily recommend this flash. Way to be creative, I look forward to seeing your art again.