Nice
My only problem was music, it was good for setting the mood in the beginning, I'd advise if you want to make it better, to get a different track maybe halfway through, or even right after it says to be king. Possibly something heavier would create a good contrast.
Almost good
that had its good points to it, the song the story, and maybe the animation. I think you got the animation idea from mask maybe? if not, it might help to look at what he did, he was very succesfull, O found it to be too scetchy tone it down a little, you don't need color though keep on doing what your doing just look around and see what was deemed good by ng
Potenial, but no point.
As previous reviewer said, this animator has got potenial. but isn't using it at its full extent. the animation also lacked "effect". meaning it was boring and felt pretty pointless.
Keep up the good work, add some sounds and give us some color!
Quite a waste of time...
But the graphics have a lot of potential. keep it up, make it longer, with color, get some better music.... stop testing and deal with real material. nice work, all in all.
Copying doesn't really get you anywhere in life..
Wow.. just wow..
It looks like you have the ability to make a perfectly good flash, but you just don't have an imagination. 99% of that looked just like Mask (in similarity.. not quality). Did you really think people wouldn't notice? =/
I think Jeff's review says it all though; copying isn't gunna get you anywhere in art.