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Reviews for "two brothers"

Awesome, dude.

I really liked this animation a lot. The characters were easily distinguishable and the plot was (although short) easily followed. I think the song really suited the animation well.
Some crtitcism: Though black and white is a suitable affect for the mod of this animation, maybe the use color could accentuate aspects of the fight and give the characters a more definate identity.
Keep up the good work... you have amazing talent.

Good

This was good I liked all of it except for a few things, I didn't like how it kept breaking the action to tell me the story... I dunno it seemed to disturb the flow for me. Also the music was kinda dumb...

Other than that I loved the style and the hand drawn graphics. Keep up the good work.

evolart responds:

Yeah thanks for the review. I was looking for a review like this. Ive seen cartoons and independent films that do that and I wanted to know if goes well in flash. Maybe I did it in a wrong way or it may not just go. Thanks.

Ok

The animation was hot, although unfinished. The blood was horribly lame, you should have animated it all and not looped it. I understand it's for practice so it's cool. The music is pretty lame, there is no sound effects and the words got gay fast. The full face scene also, his face got too big, you should have actually drawn it so you could get it right on the screen.

good for practice, excellent outlines and movements, but please take my words into consideration.

evolart responds:

Will do. Thanks for the review

Weird, but good!

Very odd style, something that I don't see quite often here on NG. This was an awsome style though! Graphics were pretty good, except they weren't in color... was that the style? The sound was just music, you should have had some swords clanking, or something that would fit there. It was a kinda sad story also, the plot was well thought out. I like it a lot!

^Emu

interesting

well, that was ok. you might want to add some more detail on the princes.. looks like rough sketch lol.. and the movement of the flower.. looked like stretching >.>