It looks really well polished, like a screen cap of a recent cartoon. That said, you might want to pitch your ideas/ talent to Nickelodeon. The style looks exactly up their alley and though without, of course, any capital, funding, a team, connections and about exactly a million more of these shots, you'll never even make a pilot. It still demonstrates some wicked talent, I say go for it. I'd love to see your name on a credits screen.