It's missing something...
like the rest of the song!!!! XD
Keeping in mind that this is a preview, I should assume the quality is significantly low as the rest of the song is 5 minutes more. Are the limits of Newgrounds affecting the sound quality? Technical issues aside.
I love the originally of the song even though I can only hear lit bit less than 1/3 of the song. The breakdown sounds epic... just the right amount of slowing down so you don't lose the energy. It has potential and which is way better than *I'm A Raver* as in terms of style. I love the piano for *I'm A Raver*, but the breakdown beats it into the ground. Also I see that this song is twice as long as most of the other which could make or break it. Good Job!
Now all I need is a way to pay for the album... :)