MEAh...... it was ok.
IT needed to be longer and you should probobly take out the bubbles and put thoes as sub-titles and make them have real voices. Take out the gray backround and have him walk up to his house and then see his friend inside.
Reviews for "No Loitering"
Cenarion responds:
Okay, I'll keep that in mind for future productions.
Decent
The animation was good, characters were quite cute. A lil background music wouldn'y have hurt. Maybe if there was a little change of scenery in this or a more interesting background that might have helped. Good work over all tho. i think youv'e got something with those two characters.
Cenarion responds:
Thanks, and I hope to improve the background scenery and add music for future productions.
Don't like it, nor hate it
Nice graphics, but it was quit simple, and too silent, great humor though!
Cenarion responds:
Thanks, and I hope yo add more sound... I was having minor audio sync problems with this flash.
Liked it :D
This was kinda fun :)
A little short and whould be so mutch more funnier with voices
Cenarion responds:
Thanks. I'm going to try voices for the next cartoon (but I'm sick as a dog right now and can't speak well) and I do hope to make future installments a bit longer.
Hm, whats the word of the day, today...
I only review films with cool titles and a hefty amount of baggage. Did I spell baggage correctly? Oh damn it. Hold on, before I get into the review, let me just confirm this, otherwise it will eat at my skull for the rest of forever.
Hm. Although Webster agrees with the spelling of Baggage, I find myself at a new loss. I do not believe thats the word I meant to use. Thinking back, I'm almost positive its not the right word for the situation, and rereading what I had written earlier proves this. It just doesnt make a lick of sense!
There are really only two other words I might have meant, and they are either 'Cabbage' or 'Bilbo Baggins'. So for the sake of the correct word and all things generally correct, I will pretend to rewrite the original compliment with the new word in place of the old. Hm, here we go.
"I only review films with cool titles and a hefty amount of cabbage." Although an interesting ring, I'm not sure if thats what I meant. I may be wrong. Anyways, lets see how Bilbo stands. "I only review films with cool titles and a hefty amount of Bilbo Baggins." No that is definitely not right either. Oh fucking hell, this game is difficult.
Wait! That's it! I know what I meant to write! Oh god, it was so obvious. So blatantly obvious and right there, in the middle of my face. Okay, so lets start this review over. Ahem, lets start this review over, the 'CORRECT' way...
I only review films with lots of titties and a hefty amount of baggage. You see, its all about tits and ass these days. Tits tits tits, I love tits.
Cenarion responds:
WTF. That is undoubtedly the longest, strangest, and most off-topic review I have ever read. My god.