I believe i have the right to speak about this.
Ok, in my opinion, this is boring, since you spent too much time drawing incredibly graphical character and style, which is probably smart nowadays since everyone on newgrounds loves to stare at good graphics instead of rofl.
My next remark is exclaiming how newgrounds was all about humor, and everyone had such a better time. Now what? I have to call you people nerds, for not liking all the old hilarious flash movies. What can I say? I'm going to give you some advice.
When you look at this submission, every day it's in a different place in the top 50. One day it'll be 46, the next day maybe at 1! But if you were to update this in a humorous way, it might actually make its way to the score of 5.00! And despite the fact of the end of this movie, you managed to get some people to chuckle and vote 5 instead of 4.
Now i have to ask everyone here, including all the people reading this AND the author, do you enjoy this? Does it make you happy seeing some girl attemting to kill a harmless animal for fun? Or would you rather just sit back and say, "who cares, its just a fucking fly." Well I absolutly GUARENTEE you that you'll find things that will make you happy and laughing here on newgrounds, instead of voting based on how much sweat, money and time the author put into to make some anime-kind graphics.
Well theres my explanation. I basically put all my thought into this, and if you hopefully are reading this Mousekliks, you could always update this and/or make another flash in humor. My words have been expressed, and I know whats going to happen. Mods, if you delete this review saying it's abusive just because you simply don't AGREE with it, i will report you to Wade, no joke.
Peace out yo.
Mothballs
EDIT: I was 12 when I made this review. 28 now and I'm laughing my ass off at my own response. The part about the fly had me on the floor