OK
Huzzah for stealing the mouths from the Super Flash Bros. Lip-Syncing tutorial!
The whole thing goes on too damn long. I get the fact that you're trying to make a sitcom-like episode of a series, but when most of the jokes fall flat it gets a bit tedious. Shorten the opening sequence and when you add pause buttons and the like, make sure your audio isn't in a movie clip.
I give you a 6 for effort though.
good good
I love table 8, ive seen your privious stuff and the humor was nice. Heh i like how u had them do the rap contest that was the best. >,^=&
Seen it before
I've seen this type of flash before. Tommorow's Nobodies and College University are way better then this unoringinal flash. Thier eyes are way too big and the voices sounded like they were just reading scripts for the first time. For those of you who have seen C.U. and T.N. you won't think very much of this flash. But if you haven't seen either before you might find this flash pretty cool.
Agree with guy below
Not only is this unorginal, I just don't find this funny. At all.
It's like a guy who hasn't heard a joke spamwriting lots of words on a piece of paper, hoping to God there's something funny within the story somewhere, then publishing it.
And the title screen's stupidly long.
Animation's ...OK. Drawings are eye-pokingly dull.
humor was mediocre, but good effort
the drawing style is good, but what counts is the humor. some bits were funny, but i was lost as the episode ran along.
i would suggest to further develop your existing characters (who, what, why?). everyone seemed to have the same type of humor and personality. from there your humor will improve and become more original.
great job on the production, it must of taken awhile. if an episode is going to take several minutes to run, it better be funny enough to hold an audience interest.