Great! ^_~
Reminds me, got to get a birthday present..
Anyway, well done! And.. If that's based on an actual event, the characters must be too, the lass must have an actual phone number.. I'll find out.. Heh heh.. *cough* anyway, review time!
First of all, Graphics, well drawn, mouse drawn, no? Just kidding, very good, and it deserved the endless number, 8! Then, style, since it's the typical animé style, which is cool, it deserves a 7! Sound deserves a 4, because it felt like I was listening to some bad game-sound. Aaaand.. That was a bad scentence.. Back to the review!
Violence a 4, because mouses don't deserve to die, they just need a little cleaning at time T_T. Therefore your Animation deserves an 8 in Violence! Rawr! Interactivity, a 1! Yay! Yeah, it's a film, what else would you expect? Humor a 9, just because it has humor! That will make your overall a 7, so, viola! There's your grade! Now scram!
Oh, nearly forgot, tips!
- Try to give your charactersa little more emotion, make it over-see-able, gives it some humor ^_~.
- Hire some VA's (Voice Actors :P). That'd give a better sound grade.
- Get yourself a new mouse, because little pieces won't do, really, they won't!
That's all, all I have to say, at least. So.. Buh-bye! ^_~