great
but you should of seen monkey or something it was a little to short compared to the last one
Reviews for "Beta Ball ep2"
ok
Its ok. The text goes by kinda fast. you should make like a button you can push to go on to the next set of text. Also it was a but hard to tell who was talking. Other than that it wasnt to bad
not bad
It's obvious you have skill and take the time to make the flash look good. As a general rule - you shouldn't have a singing voice/lyrics if there is text to read (unless it directly relates to what you are reading). Keep it up. =)
Llamalord responds:
Thanks, i was going to do voice overs, but finding the right people at the right time when im not at work/ill/asleep/the pub is kinda hard atm :)
When i kept watching it back i did pick up on that before i posted, but oh well :) shows how lazy i am :)
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i found it was a little hard to follow because during the dialoge between the two balls it was hard to read all of the text boxes before they dissapeared. Perhaps just add an extra few seconds onto some of the larger text boxes make it a little eaiser to follow. Other than that i liked it, and i like one of the other reviewers ideas of beginning the episode with an intro, or recap of whats previously happened. Otherwise good work.
Llamalord responds:
Im going to start work on a version 2 of the toon 2mrw, taking what each review has said, if it fails on here then i will drop beta ball :)