James Blunt
James Blunt took my attention. Instead of reading the lines, I was listening to the music. :D
Reviews for "Beta Ball ep2"
Blech
The music made me turn it off. Blech.
Llamalord responds:
the song is there to set the mood, i mean i could have had some c.O.f but wouldnt have worked
ok
Its ok. The text goes by kinda fast. you should make like a button you can push to go on to the next set of text. Also it was a but hard to tell who was talking. Other than that it wasnt to bad
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i found it was a little hard to follow because during the dialoge between the two balls it was hard to read all of the text boxes before they dissapeared. Perhaps just add an extra few seconds onto some of the larger text boxes make it a little eaiser to follow. Other than that i liked it, and i like one of the other reviewers ideas of beginning the episode with an intro, or recap of whats previously happened. Otherwise good work.
Llamalord responds:
Im going to start work on a version 2 of the toon 2mrw, taking what each review has said, if it fails on here then i will drop beta ball :)
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I think I know what they meant by "fix it" you have to click the words but they thought you click the ball things next to the words.
Llamalord responds:
Does say in the description the menu sucked lol :) could have scored some extra points but i just grew bored of going back and updating it time and time again