god
this would have been allright had you had vocals. I understand you were telling a story and stuff, but that intro was so boring! I almost fell asleep. My advice to u, is next time add different focal lengths and cuts. Like cut to each character as there talking. This means that when your going through a long bit of dialog, it doesnt get all ZZZZ. You really should have done character voices, seriously. The animation was okay, but most of it was looped graphic symbols. You just need to speed it up.